不错的一篇故事.虽然满短的,但还是有表达出你想写的东西.建议你写长一点,有些地方要多加描述,要不然会不明白你再讲什么.加油!
好的!!^^
Ya,Anni3!Your story very short leh!Can long a bit mah??
Anni3,are u Rachele?ur story is good,but too short liao...
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不错的一篇故事.
回复删除虽然满短的,
但还是有表达出你想写的东西.
建议你写长一点,
有些地方要多加描述,
要不然会不明白你再讲什么.
加油!
好的!!^^
回复删除Ya,Anni3!Your story very short leh!Can long a bit mah??
回复删除Anni3,
回复删除are u Rachele?
ur story is good,
but too short liao...
hi
回复删除nice to meet you
your blog story is nice to read
you can come to my blog to see or follow my blog